Saturday, March 17, 2012

Malcolm Reynolds Part WTF: Serenity: The Shepherd’s Tale (November, 2010)

I have this issue.


This story is obviously about Derrial Book, but Mal does make an appearance…in all of three panels…on a single page. He and Zoe are on Serenity working an arms deal when their contact pulls a gun on her. Mal tackles the guy to the ground while Zoe covers him. Book walks in at this point…and walks right out.

Notes of Interest:
1) Absolutely no character development here, since it’s a flashback memory Book has while he’s dying on Haven, but there’s a conflict…

WTF? Moment: …because according to the story this interaction Book has with Mal takes place two years ago, while the preacher is on Serenity. However, in the film, Mal states that only eight months have passed from when Simon and River boarded Mal’s ship to the events of the movie. And we know Book joined the ship the same day as River and Simon. I consider this a typo, since Joss wrote the film and only outlined this story.

WTF? Moment #2: Other than that, it’s clear that the main part of this story – where Book is shot and dying on Haven - takes place during the film, and Mal arrives in time to speak with him before he passes. But as to the flashback, there’s no frame of reference to tell exactly when Book walks in on the busted arms deal, which is okay, but firmly places this story – in terms of Mal anyway – as a W…T…F.


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